: Is this line in a song/poem grammatically correct: "But oh how the love, it still wrecks me every time."? Is this line in a song (or might just end up as a poem) grammatically correct: "But
Is this line in a song (or might just end up as a poem) grammatically correct: "But oh how the love, it still wrecks me every time." ??
It seems to not be grammatically correct to me, but I just wanted to double check. I imagine the grammatically correct way to write it would be "But oh how the love still wrecks me every time." ... However, I'm hoping to stick with how I currently have it because the correct way doesn't fit in terms of the flow of the song. So I'll likely just claim artistic license and keep it the way have it... but I also wanted to double check if it could be considered grammatically correct or not.
Thanks in advance!
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