: Re: Antagonist lacks motivation - where do I find it? My triller has an Antagonist who is classified as a sociopath and narcissist. He becomes infatuated with my MC who is an Ex-Army sergeant making

The antagonist clearly has some deep rooted connection with your MC.
If he goes as far as hacking, stalking and trying to seduce your MC.
He probably has been fantasizing about her or someone very similar to her for a very long long time.
People don't go sociopath overnight after all.

I guess he got everything he wanted when he was young too.
Getting all narcistic about it since he clearly deserved everything he got. People should be happy to give him whatever he wants.

Wait what?
Your MC denied him?
Doesn't she know who he is?

I guess he will have to look more closely at whatever the MC is up to?
What is going on with her on social media anyway? An injury made her decide to stop with the army? What a nice going away party she had. Who are those friends she has anyway? Can't be better then me, right?

I better help MC with her life a bit. Couldn't hurt to give her a hand.

Right...?

I might have turned the thing I wanted to write about in something like a backstory, but you can get the idea, right? ;)

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