: Re: Describing slices of a tedious eternity without becoming tedious This is a story of a guy in the waiting room for the afterlife. Because this guy was a horrible specimen of humanity in his

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Write if from the perspective of the character's internal, rather than external experience. The gradual realization that one is trapped is a nice trope in horror. Horror is interesting. Tedium is not. The horror here is in the internal experience.

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