: Re: Executing a tonal shift A novel's tone/atmosphere is typically established within the first few chapters of the book. So, let's say, we establish the story as a light-hearted, over-the-top fantasy

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My advice to you would be to watch the first third of a few horror movies and take careful note of how you feel while you are sitting there scoffing popcorn (there has to be popcorn).

Typically, movies like that start out very light and humorous - you might initially feel like you are watching a romantic comedy or one of those hilarious road-trip movies. Then - something happens. Perhaps it gets dark and the GPS gives up. Maybe there is an accident on the road ahead and the only route is through a forest. Possibly there is a loud noise from downstairs and you know for a fact that no-one could possibly be down there.

Whatever the problem - a tonal shift will occur - suddenly or gradually, as subsequent events unfold. Watch for it. Take notes on how it has happened and what the actors/directors have done to achieve this effect. Then work on replicating this effect in your writing.

Alternatively: read horror. It takes longer that way, but the advantage is that it can give you the words you need rather than just the images/tonality.

Good luck with your project.

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