: Re: Too Many Goals? Not unsimilar to myself, my protagonist potentially has too many goals. He's isn't a likeable character (which is how I intended him) so to keep reader interest, I would like

He sounds like a social character who has got all the attention a teenager (I'm not assuming he is one) could want - itâ€™s good if he has some goals but too many would get tedious - what is the most important goal?

For example in Breaking Bad - Walter White wanted to fund his familyâ€™s welfare when he learnt he had cancer, in the long run he got rid of his obstacles by using people as pawns and manipulating others (this isnâ€™t about the ethics) and his knowledge from being a teacher.

Your character need a problem, something to fit in with your characterâ€™s life , losing friends and getting malware on YouTube for example. They donâ€™t have to solve the problem, they must try to

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