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I have these types of sentences all over my novel. Help.

Our early drafts are usually full of bad writing habits. We fix these in editing and revision. So sharpen your red pencil and read through your work. Be ruthless.

Break your run-ons into shorter sentences, delete unnecessary stuff ("The smell of something burning caught Hakuâ€™s attention and he ninja rolled away to save his meal."), reword and reorganize your sentences, etc.

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