: Need advice about the structure of my body part My first body part will argument that educating young children about history is of importance. The permitted words for this part is 150 words.

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My first body part will argument that educating young children about history is of importance. The permitted words for this part is 150 words. Which one below do you think is more appropriate?

There are several rationales for the belief that history education to young people are important; one involves the education system and
the other the psychology of group learning. In terms of the education
system, A (1999) argues that the education system is... [elaboration].
Regarding to the psychology of group learning, B (2000) indicates that
...

OR

There is a rationale for my belief that history classes should be taught. Firstly, group education is important... [elaboration]. Secondly, the psychology is additionally important [elaboration].

Which one is more preferable in the context of only 150 words allowed in the first argument?

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