: Re: Avoiding repetition when there are two unidentified individuals The tall figure was overwhelmingly tall. It stood in the corner of the room. The skinny figure right beside him sat on a
This is an easy problem.
After a brief description of the unnamed Tall Figure, you can simply refer to it as "Tall" henceforth.
Similarly the skinny figure can be referred to as Thin
And then until you reveal their name, you can simply refer to them as Tall and Thin
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