: Re: How to fill novel if you have just some moments prepared? I read some of my old novels and realized that I often filled them with unnecessary info and pseudojokes so I could quickly rejoin

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You've got a plot planned out, you've got several scenes that you see vividly, you want to get them on paper, because they burn like a fire in your bones. Great. Now that you've done that, you must look at everything else.

There are two ways you can approach this: you can plot what happens between your already-written Scene A and Scene B, or you can discovery-write it.

Either way, here are some elements you would need to explore (not an exhaustive list):

Your overarching conflict: what preliminary conflicts would build it up? What challenges does the antagonist place in the protagonist's path? What are the antagonist's successes, showing his strength? What would help foreshadow the way the protagonist resolves the conflict?
Your characters: how do they interact? What conflict is there between them? How is friendship and trust between them built?
What lessons does your protagonist need to learn? Do you show them before they've learnt those lessons? How about in the process of learning?
What is missing between Scene A and Scene B? Who/what has changed, that you haven't really shown?

Now mix those elements up to create scenes: your protagonists face some challenge together, learning things about the world and about each other. You can add subplots that support your main arch.

For myself, when I'm stumped for ideas, I throw my characters into a situation, that is - I create some trouble for them, and see how they react, how they face the challenge, what they learn and how they grow. Since I already know the main themes I want to explore, I know what kind of "trouble" makes sense within the story's frame. (Then I cut away everything that isn't helpful.)

Be prepared to change what you have already written. Once you start to explore your story in more depth than you've done so far, you might discover that the already-written scene doesn't quite work - a character might act differently than you initially planned, or the scene would be occurring at a different point in the story, or you might have come up with a better solution to the problem the Scene was solving. That's a normal and essential part of writing.

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