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If the two Havillands are in separate scenes and which one has been established, you could use their last names, for example:
Havilland threw his hands up in surrender.
or:
Havilland tapped her foot.

I also sometimes use descriptions of appearance or personality which have already been established, for example:
The blue-eyed man.
or, sometimes:
The more arrogant of the two sneered.

I hope this was of some help! :)

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