: Re: Making him into a bully (how to show mild violence) Joe is the worst. Nobody likes him, not even the so-called friends he teams up with at school, filling other students with terror. He's
In my experience, a majority of bullying takes place in peer dominated areas: hallways, lunchrooms, cafeterias, etc. The teacher is not in control, so there are ample opportunities for cutting remarks, snide looks or even vague implied threats (popping knuckles, pounding fists/grinding). If you were looking for something physical, but minor, what about gym class/sports practice? It could be as simple as throwing a basketball at someone's head when they aren't looking to get a laugh and inflict pain, or an escalated fistfight when a teammate lets an opponent score.
Keep in mind, the more vulnerable the victim of his intimidation, the worse Joe will look and vice versa. The farther he goes to protect the child, the more his change will show. You may want to construct a similar situation where he reacts opposite, just to reinforce?
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