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Personally, in your case, I'd change the moment the kids leave. You're already planning on having the children return to their own time shortly after Mozes came down the mountain, and I think it might be better if their return happens BEFORE Mozes erupts in rage. It seems like your main characters already know what's going to happen, so you could just have them get sent back to their own time and then have someone quote from the Bible to justify as to why they've been recalled so early, in a "I couldn't have lived with myself if I forced you to watch that" sort of thing.

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