: Re: How do I write a gory scene? I'm trying to write some gory scenes. I'm having a few problems, though. I asked around online and determined that I need to really highlight the senses when

@Becky328

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The trick is thinking of the worst thing you can think of like slow, painful death or freezing to death or burning to death at basically multipling it by 100 and describing it. Like I chose killing your own family painfully. I'm not brilliant at ridiculously gory scenes but how's this:

The stench of blood and vomit envaded my senses. Smell and sight. This would not be easily forgotten. Not like the others. Still spitting like fire from the gaping, infected wound coating your clothes. A river of red liquid raced along the concrete floor. Paralysed in agony and fear he/she lay. Still gasping for air. She/he were your brethren. And you had to let them die.

I write on Wattpad but only sometimes I use gory scenes so it's probably bad. I hope this helps.

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