: Re: How to subtly portray a secret relationship I currently have a set of characters in which two of them have had (and still do have) history together, however I do not intend to drop the ball
I'd fall back once again on the Iceberg Theory. Go ahead and fully flesh out their entire relationship --for your own benefit. But only include the details in the story that would naturally come to the attention of the POV character.
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