: Re: I have a unique character that I'm having a problem writing. He's a virus! Yes, you read that correctly. My villain character is literally a virus. He thinks and behaves just like any other

You don't show a "wispy cloud" you just show ordinary people behaving suddenly out-of-character and attempting to kill (or whatever). What could be more menacing than believing anyone could turn against you at anytime for no reason?

Leave the "wispy cloud" for the last scene as it escapes into space.

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: I keep going back to the story in Breaking Bad. The purpose of the story, novel or TV series, is to establish characters in an environment and then show how they react or accommodate to

: I'll skip repeating what others have said. Some additional thoughts: As other have pointed out, "tiphoof" is probably not an anatomically accurate term for how a hoofed creature would ever walk,

: Many sexual situations, but no actual sex scenes? My guile heroine's character arc is almost entirely sex and manipulation. I tell (not show) she was a sex worker in the past, it's left ambiguous

: How do I subvert the tropes of a train heist? What are the recognizable tropes to a "train heist", or more broadly the action sequences where a protagonist boards a moving train in order to

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