: Re: How to represent jealousy in a cute way? The main character (which is a girl) of the first romance I'm writing would feel jealous sometimes of her love interest, but I want it to be a cute

@Bethany377

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Maybe something simple like a motion such as pushing up her glasses, buttoning the top button of a shirt, letting her hair drop to cover her face on the side nearest him. She does it to symbolize her distancing herself or trying to ignore what she sees. But he sees it as a habit that endears her to him. Perhaps he doesn't even put the two things together if she does something different every time, but these little quirky subtle actions are what draws him to her. The things he finds irresistible that no one else does and helps him realize she is the only one for him.

Care would need to be taken to tell the inner monologue of the flirter immediately afterword to catch their perspective of the quirky behavior.

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