: Re: Does every chapter have to "blow the reader away" so to speak? I amended some of my chapters so that they're more intriguing and engaging for my readers. But there's one particular chapter

Not every chapter needs to blow the reader away
No, not every chapter needs to blow the reader away, and you shouldn't be trying to. There are multiple reasons that this isn't something you should try to do. Also, this probably isn't really the issue with that chapter.
Why you don't want to do this
First of all, you can't. Trying to blow the reader away with every chapter, page, and paragraph you write will lead to you chasing perfection and never thinking your work is done. No one can write like that and believing that you need to will harm your work.
Second, it is exhausting to read a book that is written like that. If every chapter presents some new exciting twist or development you don't give the reader (or your characters) a chance to process things.
Finally, it will make your work seem one-paced. Sure it might make your book a page turner, edge of your seat epic. But it is far more likely to make it feel frantic and rushed. Think of the books you love, not every chapter is absolutely gripping. The tension of the book waxes and wanes as the author builds toward mini-climaxes then relaxes again.
Why that probably isn't your issue
Most books start with a "blow you away" opening chapter or two. That's writing 101, get their attention right from the start. You beta-readers are probably indicating that the transition or drop off from your introduction is too stark. Something about that third chapter was a letdown. You should get more feedback and push for details about what felt wrong about it.
I am imagining a situation where you had a great idea for a book opening and then your third chapter is the start of your narrative proper. Rather than worrying about blowing the reader away, look at why the third chapter doesn't follow the expectations you have given the reader based on the first two. You may need to adjust your opening to fit better with your overall narrative.

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