: Italicize part of a word in fiction? I am wondering if I can or should take a bit of stylistic license and italicize just part of a word: He took a sharp turn back into a side street,

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Salinger does it a ton in Catcher in the Rye - hence the very reason I found my way to this site/link discussion this matter - as I wanted to know more about it....

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Yep, works for me. You're reproducing a speech pattern in which part of the word is emphasized.

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Yes, this is OK, as it allows you to emphasise certain things, that you want the readers to notice. In your example, that the character has collided with another person. By putting it in Italics, you are also letting the reader know this person is important, and may play a role later.

A word of warning- don't overuse this technique( as with any technique). It can get tiring soon, and loses it's effect.

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I believe this is perfectly acceptable and does a good job of emphasising your point. I've seen this done before and it works stylistically.

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