: Re: Punctuation assistance with complicated list of titles during a formal greeting I'm working on a scene in a high-fantasy setting where the main characters greet each other for the first time.
It's a disaster. When you began a sentence with the word 'wordlessly' you identified yourself as an ESOL novice.
[Bob] presented his beautiful, shimmering wife to Mary.
Mary bowed graciously and outstretched her hands to the esteemed guest. “And you, my Sarah: soother of the seas, queen of the oceans, sweet nurturer, and mother of music . . . How's it hangin'?"
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