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Very broadly, consider the topic of an essay being: "Compare a popular culture song's lyrics to society."
I have chose the song "Right Now" by Fort Minor to write this essay on. To give you an idea of what the song is like, here just a few of the lyrics:
But no I'm just taking it in
Out the window of a hotel bedroom again
Tomorrow I'll be gone, I don't know when I'll be back
But in this world everything can change just like that
[Someone is] Scratching off a lotto ticket hoping for a real winner
Sneaking through the border just to work and to eat a real dinner
Essentially, the song is about the hard life of some people, including:
immigrants trying to make a life in America
homeless trying to fend for themselves: find something to eat, find somewhere to sleep
families of soldiers stuck in Iraq
etc.
and how things can change so suddenly.
So, given that broad essay topic, is the following a good outline?
Here's my outline thus far:
Intro
Working on a good hook
mention song name, artist, release date
bring up that life isn't easy for some
thesis of the final line of the chorus: "But in this world everything can change just like that."
First Paragraph
introduce immigrants
high hopes of coming into the country
quote: "Sneaking through the border just to work and to eat a real dinner."
describe how hopes can be given up due to the economy, things change, they're stuck once again in a tragic place
Second Paragraph
introduce homeless
quote: "There's somebody on the curb who really needs a jacket."
weather, lack of shelter, lack of food, degrades their health, they may even start bad habits
quote: "[He] spent half the rent at a bar getting plastered." and now he has to walk "to a shop where he's about to get fired."
Do I need more here?
Third Paragraph
introduce soldiers and their families
quote: "For the act of freedom ... somebody is stuck in Iraq hoping that he gets shipped back breathing."
Change in lifestyles for the soldier (new fears of life) and the family (begging and praying their beloved one will make it back)
devasting when all of a sudden someone gets drafted
I'm concerned that this paragraph needs to be restructured
Conclusion
Many ways in this world where everything takes a sudden shift for the worse
quote: "I'm just taking it in, out [of] a hotel bedroom window again. Tomorrow I'm gone, [and] I don't know when I'll be back."
Working on a good way to wrap this up
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To answer the question in your title: yes! The question that I don't see asked is how long is your essay supposed to be? Is there a word limitation or expectation? If so, then that will influence the length of your essay and help dictate how much you need in your outline.
As for the outline itself, I believe you have a very good working start. I like the way that you have identified three separate talking points along with specific quotes from the song to tie into each one. I have to admit I have never heard this song, but based on the lyrics you have quoted, I believe it is something I would like to check out.
As far as whether you need more in the second paragraph or need to restructure the third paragraph, keep in mind that this is just an outline. The final content will determine what needs to be changed. Let the outline guide you, and often I find that keeping it simple, as you have done, makes it easier for you to write. If you spend too much time and effort on the outline, you'll find yourself never progressing beyond that because you're constantly trying to perfect the outline.
The fact that you have identified each separate section as a paragraph leads me to think that the overall essay is going to be pretty short in length. If that is true, then you should have plenty to work with based on what you have. If each "paragraph" is actually a separate "section", I still believe you have enough to work with. Now start writing!
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