: Describing a Smile Im trying to show the fact that in a picture my character is smiling, but I don't want to say "we were smiling" this is the sentence im trying to fix: "We were both

Im trying to show the fact that in a picture my character is smiling, but I don't want to say

"we were smiling"

this is the sentence im trying to fix: "We were both smiling foolishly, he looked so handsome in his tuxedo and honestly, I looked pretty good in my dress."

I can't think of any other way of saying it, but I know it can be worded differently. Can anyone help?

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One alternative is to describe the apparent feelings of the people in the photo.

"He looked so handsome in his tuxedo, I looked pretty good in my dress, and we both looked like we'd just heard something hilarious. We hadn't, it was just anticipation of the moment, I remember it felt like waking up on Christmas morning when I was a kid."

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