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Topic : Re: How do I make a dialogue tag for a man speaking to someone behind himself Currently I have a very uncomfortable sentence: '#####' announced Graham behind himself, turning his head away as - selfpublishingguru.com

Mendez196

: Re: How do I make a dialogue tag for a man speaking to someone behind himself Currently I have a very uncomfortable sentence: '#####' announced Graham behind himself, turning his head away as

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Stop trying to do it with a tag; clarity is more important than brevity.

While looking out the window, Graham spoke to John standing behind him. "####."

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