: Re: How to state multiple instances of evidence? A would always lie about B. He told everybody he was weak. Furthermore he told all the adults how he enjoyed travelling, even though he did

@LarsenBagley300

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I would give specific examples of what his statement was, followed by an example that proves the lie. For your sample, why is he NOT weak (and I would give a sample that is "observed"). If there is a group of people, give different people different counter-claims. A makes a claim, however, Mr. D, his neighbor, once remarked on a counter-detail that disproves the claim. You repeat "Furthermore" twice. Try and find a different list word for the different claims.

Also you need to figure out what your voice is... is this comedy? Then be hyperbolic (A is a habitual liar. It was said that A would claim the sky is polka-dots on a cloudless summer day) and possibly sarcastic (A once said he wasn't just a great swimmer, but he once walked on water at the town lake. C, the park manager, said recalled the incident saying tha it was really warm that day for a typical January, so C still had to fish A out of the lake when the thin broke under A's weight.).

In the later sarcastic example, not only do we provide the claim and the counter, but we also point out that while the claim is "technically true" to the walking on water, it's a lie in that the phrase assumes liquid water... and even then A still needed a rescue.

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