: Re: How to explain the cold How could one explain breathing when it's really cold outside and you can see your breath? I just can't find a good way to word it.

The biting cold filled [his/her] lungs with every breath of the stale air that filled the small home. The warm exhale was more palatable, but [he/she] braced for fresh shards of ice to stab [his/her] throat again.

Thought I might exaggerate a bit. Not sure how cold you were going for.

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