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Topic : Re: Comma or not after subordinate clause at the beginning of a sentence I have a sentence with a structure similar to this one: "When advertisers try to influence the beliefs of consumers about - selfpublishingguru.com

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: Re: Comma or not after subordinate clause at the beginning of a sentence I have a sentence with a structure similar to this one: "When advertisers try to influence the beliefs of consumers about

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Another suggestion to make the sentence less ambiguous would be: When influencing the beliefs of consumers about the effects of products, advertisers face a tradeoff."

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