: Re: My writing is stiff at the start, I think I need an attitude adjustment My story is raring to be put on paper. But the first paragraph, indeed the first chapter, is stiff as a board. Way

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Start two chapters early

If it takes you a couple of chapters to get into the flow of writing, then start writing two or three chapters before where you plan on opening your story. These chapters aren't ever going to be seen by the readers - they're purely for your own writerly benefit. After you've finished your story then go back and cut the chapters in editing. If there's anything worth salvaging, you can slide it into other chapters as needed.

From a larger philosophical perspective - you should not be concerned about quality in a first draft. The majority of the words in a first draft will never be read by anyone but yourself. For some writers, none of the words in their first drafts ever see the light of day. The first draft is for the writer and the writer alone, to be a framework that later and better drafts can be built off of.

Generally speaking, constantly rewriting the first chapter is unlikely to help, because you aren't gaining anything between rewrites. You don't know anything more about your story after rewrite 3 than you did after rewrite 2. So write other things. Write a chapter about what your protagonist did on the Wednesday before the story starts. Write a scene that sets up the inciting incident. Write three pages of your protagonist singing to themself in the shower.

None of these things are things you would actually want to put in your story. But the act of creating them will help expand the amount of information that you personally have about the story and characters, and will help you when you go back and revisit that first chapter.

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