: First, can you even believe why these two particularly powerful characters would remain hidden? If if you can't convince yourself, you won't convince a reader. Second, does it have to be in

@Ogunnowo420

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First, can you even believe why these two particularly powerful characters would remain hidden? If if you can't convince yourself, you won't convince a reader.
Second, does it have to be in the same setting? Your antagonists clearly do not. How about your protagonist and support characters? Can you separate them from your world and plop them down in a different story. You may need a new stand alone novel or trilogy to contain this story.

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