: Re: Choosing between two people in a romance? So, my dilemma is as follows. I have a romance project with the MC trying to choose between two women who he cares for very much. Each has broken

@Murphy332

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Your best bet is to read from the start by putting yourself in the MC shoes and see if while you are reading if you get more of a reaction out of one girl then the other.
Another option is to consider where you want the MC and the girls to be like by the end. If you have an end point in mind for each you can chose the girl who matches better with how the MC will end up. If you don't know then start considering how the MC will end up depending on which girl he will get with and how he will develop by the end of the story.
I think another thing is to consider how the MC felt when he first met each girl or met again in the case of Cassidy. For example when he first met Diane did he like her right away was it strong, when he meet Cassidy again did old and lingering feels pop up again. Or did he think back to Cassidy often when they were apart. The more intense the feeling that pop up during the first interaction the more memorable it is and the more the MC will lean to thinking about that girl over the other.
The key to chose is really based on how your MC feels usually while witting romance the girls will invoke different feelings in the MC and bring out different sides of him, but what matters most is which one makes the MC feel more strongly and that one will usually be the one that best brings out what the MC is seeking in a relationship.

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