: Re: Realistically writing culture shock for this character? I want some help writing a character. Her name is Christina and she lived in an underground bunker, in a post-apocalyptic world, so sheâ€™s

Maybe it can be kind of like the film Blast to the Past and Brendan Fraser when he comes out of his bunker and he experiences culture shock. They made it comical but your story can have a different arc and you can make it whatever you want it to be. Great concept!

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: As you suspected, in the first sentence it's ambiguous who is eating the oranges - is it the men or is it the deer? The comma in the second sentence makes it clear that it's not the deer

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: Both Ellie and Ruby are curious. Both of them are away from their real home. In all honesty, if those are the only traits they have in common, then it's unlikely that anyone is going to

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: As you suspected, in the first sentence it's ambiguous who is eating the oranges - is it the men or is it the deer? The comma in the second sentence makes it clear that it's not the deer

: Engineer who wants to improve their writing from scratch To expand on the title, I am about to finish my engineering degree. However, I haven't really written an essay for the past ten years.

: Do thesis statements have to follow a specific order? I am 40 years old, returning to college a second time. I have just been informed by my teacher that a thesis statement must always list

: Both Ellie and Ruby are curious. Both of them are away from their real home. In all honesty, if those are the only traits they have in common, then it's unlikely that anyone is going to

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