: Re: What could be a way to improve my English writing? I know there are general recommendations to improve English writing skills but I wonder if anyone could suggest hyper-personalized ways for

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As F1Krazy said, writing critiques are off-topic here, but I think it will be helpful to fix a few small things in the passage you submitted, just to give you an idea of what grammar skills you should work on.
Here are my corrections:

Employing a synthetic dataset is becoming inevitable for training a deep neural network, as it provides an effective and economic way to generate a massive amount of data even with the accurate ground truth information.

I have highlighted where you should place indefinite articles ("a") in this sentence, and I also added a comma for readability.
Grammar rule of note: Placement of articles. Whenever you have a verb followed by a singular noun ("he ran a business", "she washed the dog", etc.) you must separate the verb from the noun with an article, otherwise the sentence sounds incoherent ("he ran business", "she washed dog" would be examples of incorrect sentence grammar).

While high quality scenes helped us to maintain smaller domain gaps when compared to to real world data, simpler scenes contributed to efficiently increasing the diversity of the dataset.

Here I have added a small phrase to make that first clause more readable, and also corrected a typo in the spelling of "efficiently."
Grammar rule of note: Comparison phrases. When you are comparing two concepts in English, you typically should have some kind of flowing phrase in between, such as "when compared to", "as opposed to", etc. For example, if I was saying, "I am better at chess when compared to my brother," it would sound odd if I removed the flowing phrase and it just became "I am better at chess to my brother." However, instead of adding this "flow phrase," you can also employ "than," and the sentence can become: "I am better at chess than my brother." This would be just as grammatically correct.

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