: Re: Is this couplet in iambic pentameter? Is this couplet in iambic pentameter? Sir thou are in love, take Cupid's wings fly to acquire the source of that feeling.
Close, but not quite.
A line in iambic pentameter is made up of five iambic feet. An iambic foot is made up of an unstressed syllable followed by a stressed syllable (for example, the word "a-bove"). For this answer, I will be using bold to indicate stressed syllables.
Your first line fits the meter, but only has nine syllables, and is missing an unstressed syllable at the beginning:
Sir thou are in love, take Cupid's wings
Your second line has ten syllables, but the first and last feet are inverted, with the stressed syllable coming first:
Fly to acquire the source of that feeling
That's not to say you can't do this: Wikipedia lists several examples of rhythmic variations, from Shakespeare and others.
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