: Re: Should I add in POV's for characters if the plot wasn't designed around them? I am writing a YA fantasy. There are three main characters, but the plot was entirely designed around Character

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I think the main thing to be careful about when using different POVs is that while you can absolutely explore the arcs of your other characters - and in fact, that's a great thing to do to flesh out minor characters and make the world feel alive - you shouldn't take the spotlight off your main character for too long. Your reader will probably love your side characters and won't mind a chapter or two from their perspective, but your main character is your most interesting and developed character, and so, in most novels, the majority of chapters should be from their perspective.
That being said, there are of course novels that are exceptions to this idea. The Game of Thrones novels famously switch POV each chapter, jumping wildly between heroes and villains and members of different families, and often have the perspectives of very minor side characters, such as peasants and smallfolk, instead of our major nobility characters. A Feast for Crows opens on the perspective of Alleras, "The Sphinx," a minor character who is basically never seen again in the series in a major way.
So I think the main things to consider when thinking about writing a POV chapter from a different character are:

Is this character's perspective interesting and easy to differentiate? Perhaps they have a different thinking and speaking style than the main character that comes across in how you write their POV, or perhaps they are a different person internally than they are externally - both of these are excellent things to explore in a POV chapter. How will their outlook differ from the main character's outlook in a unique way? Do they have secret motivations, quirks and intentions that the reader doesn't know about yet and will be interesting to reveal now?
Does it improve the story to know what this character is thinking right now, or is this just filler? If it would enrich the narrative to hear this character's point of view instead of the main character's, it's a good addition. If it's taking time away from the main character, or just there for comic relief or info-dumping, don't include it.
Why is it important to switch POV, specifically? What are you trying to convey? What will the reader learn? Are they going to gain insight into your main character or a major factor of the plot? Will this character and others be developed in a way that's interesting? What themes or secrets will the reader get from this POV that they weren't getting before?

As an example from my own work, a chapter of my detective novel switches perspective from the detective to his best friend, to give an outsider's perspective on what my detective looks like and indirectly reveal how strange the detective is to other people - something he doesn't realize himself. In his mind and POV, he comes across very suave and calm and collected, but from the friend's point of view, it's revealed that he comes across very stoic, blunt and odd, a contrast between how he thinks of himself and how other characters see him that the rest of the book plays with. I found this a good reason to switch POV for a chapter to give the reader that insight.

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