: Re: Using "now" from a character's POV The story is written in 3rd person POV, close. But I feel like the very last end feels jarring. He trailed his hand along the railing as he climbed the

If you feel the very last end is jarring, drop it.
This is purely a Question of style, which means either all that matters is what you feel, or you might like to join a week(end) seminar for writers where you could explore the topic in useful detail.
What's 3rd person POV, "close," please?
What might make this "objectivelyâ€¦" rather than just "jarring"?

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