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Your character is not very smart.
/If you can keep your head while all others around you are losing theirsâ€”get somebody to explain the situation to you.
In conclusion, the funny response to the beginning of Rudyard Kiplingâ€™s poem was created by an anonymous individual by 1935. Bob Rigley received credit by February 1939. Variants have entered circulation over the years./
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It is easy to be brave when you don't understand what is going on. Or do not fully think through the consequences of what you are about to do. A guy like this is useful because when you wind him up and point him in the right direction, he will go. He needs a handler who can take some care with the pointing piece.

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