: Re: Main Character Death I have a main character out of 3 main characters in a Historical Fiction book. His name is Darius. I have planned for him to die in a POW camp during WW1, this will

For point A; Darius needs to have finished up most of what you want him to do. maybe leave a few loose ends because death isn't always convenient.
For point B; You can't give the other two characters time to stand around for a few hours crying, they have to keep moving and if they stop they die.
For point C; Darius sacrifices himself to save the other 2 MC, or warn a troop of soldiers they're about to be ambushed, or something like that.
Overall, I think you can check all these boxes if Darius dies distracting guards while the other two MCs escape from the POW camp. Good luck!

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: Another answer says to make them opposites, but I have another idea: Make them similar You describe your character as constantly getting into trouble, beating people up in fights, and scaring

: Re: Main Character Death I have a main character out of 3 main characters in a Historical Fiction book. His name is Darius. I have planned for him to die in a POW camp during WW1, this will

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: How can I slow down my story without drama? Been reading through my stories, and I've noticed that there's a lot of shooty-shooty-bang-bang where people fight each other, but not a whole lot

: Another answer says to make them opposites, but I have another idea: Make them similar You describe your character as constantly getting into trouble, beating people up in fights, and scaring

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