: How do I make this scene exciting? I developed this character that sees her beloved one going through lethal injection. The character is in charge of the process. The character is going to enjoy

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I developed this character that sees her beloved one going through lethal injection.
The character is in charge of the process.
The character is going to enjoy the dominance and the power she has over the prisoner.
I'm not sure how should I describe this without making it creepy.
Also, as she straps the prisoner down and tries to calm him down, she sees his erection. (There's no erotic scene, that's his body's reaction)
She knows that he's anxious and scared,... what kind of appropriate comment or reaction should she have to make the prisoner comfortable?

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