: Re: Need help to rephrase this sentence to prevent a run-on I'm writing a narrative and am having a problem structuring the order of events. Here is what I have: Jamie had an 8 am flight

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Because Jamie had an 8am flight, she had to leave the house at 6am
which left me to feed and dress the girls, which we
normally do together.

Alternatively, I guess you could break down like this:

Because Jamie had an 8am flight, she had to leave the house at 6am, leaving me to dress and feed the girls. These are normally responsibilities shared between us.

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