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It seems the trouble you are having is differentiating characters easily. I've found when I have trouble telling between two characters without using their name, then they are not sufficiently different to begin with.

Look into traits list on Google, and read some articles on character diamonds.

Also try backing up your scenes, and then removing all character names from the scene. You will force yourself to consider any and all other elements that can differentiate between characters.
I've even gone so far as to remove names from excerpts of successful novels which have already been published so I can observe the techniques the authors use for characterization. It is worth examining other author's works and can improve your own writing significantly (Hemingway is an excellent example to study).

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