: Re: Writing style — comma, period and re-referring the object of the first sentence again as subject in second sentence Alex look around the room, it's almost empty except few small empty boxes

@Sarah872

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I normally use repetitions when I want to emphasize something. Use repetitions in those examples, for me, would not be a good practice.

Just as an example.

I thought about it. I thought about it deeply, and realized it
was not the way.

In your example phrases, I would go for something like Dale suggested.

Alex looks around. The room is almost empty...

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