: Re: Making simple sentences more interesting The street is filled with cars and people. I tend to write simple, straightforward sentences, like the one above. Can you suggest ways I can write

@Murray165

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Ask yourself why that simple sentence is in the story. What purpose is it mean to serve?
Once you know its "motivation" then you can build on it to make the narrative richer.

The street is filled with cars and people because ...
The street is filled with cars and people despite ...
The street is filled with cars and people until ...
The street is filled with cars and people. Little do they know that ...

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