: Re: Using pronouns properly in order to avoid confusion and repetition Sample text without pronouns: I don't remember how it started but Monica began talking about Monica's motherâ€”a topic

In addition to the great answers you have already received, don't be shy to reword where necessary. For example, I might change:

She told me about how her mother used to take trips to Mount Everest every time she had a fight with her father. She would stay in a hotel for two daysâ€¦

She told me about how her mother used to take trips to Mount Everest every time her parents fought. Her mother would stay in a hotel for two daysâ€¦

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: Should this introductory quotation be translated, untranslated, or dropped? When I first wrote "Gawain's Guilt-Girdle" (14 lines of verse) I introduced it with a short (modernized/translated) quotation

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: Re: Using pronouns properly in order to avoid confusion and repetition Sample text without pronouns: I don't remember how it started but Monica began talking about Monica's motherâ€”a topic

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: Dream analysis research I am currently writing a short story/novella. This piece of fiction describes a child who has vivid dreams. His dreamworld starts to blend with the real world by him

: The key to your question lies in the phrase no changed meaning by standardizing. The designer of the original publication might have elected to set all article titles in a Gothic font to

: Should this introductory quotation be translated, untranslated, or dropped? When I first wrote "Gawain's Guilt-Girdle" (14 lines of verse) I introduced it with a short (modernized/translated) quotation

: Becoming better blogger when I write about diverse topics I often tend to treat my blog as my diary and thereby end up having a mix up personal and general blogs on my site. I understand

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