: Re: A short story, any comments? I am new to this forum and would like to share one of my short novel here. I would love to hear any comments and thoughts (e.g., how the story flows, any better

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This is a beautiful, beautiful story. It reads like a fable. The atmosphere is wonderful just the way it is.

In many places, the phrasing is clearly not English. But even in those places, the meaning is clear, and the phrasing is beautiful, almost poetic.

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