: Re: First person pov with more than one main chars I really love -- and most of time write in -- first person point of view. The novel I'm writing is somewhat different from what I'm used to.

@Carla500

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I've read at least one book which successfully did this; the author just titled each chapter "Bruno" and "Melusine," depending on whose perspective it was. The timeline was mostly chronological, although there was some overlap so we see how one felt about the other's actions. It worked perfectly fine for me.

It's not subterfuge. Label each chapter, throw in a time stamp if you want to be crystal clear, and you're fine.

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