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Topic : Re: How can I avoid word repetition in the following paragraph? Eri knelt down slowly and thought about her world. The one with the solid ground in which she had stood all her life. Would - selfpublishingguru.com

Carla500

: Re: How can I avoid word repetition in the following paragraph? Eri knelt down slowly and thought about her world. The one with the solid ground in which she had stood all her life. Would

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"touching the earth." A native speaker would use that phrasing. "Earth" in this context has the double meaning of literal soil and "the earth," the planet.

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