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Topic : Re: Is it a bad practice to end sentences with phrases like: "...and went over to it" or "...and did X to it?" I often find myself writing stuff like this: Eri's eyes scanned the room, stopping - selfpublishingguru.com

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I took a creative writing class and my teacher said that using "it" instead of a proper word to describe what you are looking at or touching is "boring." and in all honesty it is, i would recommend using the second set of examples. As for bad practice i'm not sure, I'm sure it works sometimes, but I would try to avoid it.


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