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Topic : Re: When mentioning two people in a sentence, what's the proper way to use a pronoun to reference the first? Example: A fighter is someone who fights for the pleasure of the spectator, against - selfpublishingguru.com

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: Re: When mentioning two people in a sentence, what's the proper way to use a pronoun to reference the first? Example: A fighter is someone who fights for the pleasure of the spectator, against

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Change something else in the sentence.

A fighter is someone who fights for the pleasure of spectators, against his or her own safety.

A fighter is someone who fights for the pleasure of the audience, against his or her own safety.

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