: Re: Should I italicise when the protagonist quote other character's words? For example in a story I'm writing a character says the following: “Be careful,” An-Mei said, ignoring my question.

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I'm not sure it's necessary.

Some authors use this technique when not crediting the person who said it. This technique works best when the 'narrator' quotes it multiple times.

I had decided to avoid the mountain at night. Be careful. Don't get close to her. But did why people fear her so much?

In your example, you're crediting the person who said it, which is a direct reference to the original scene/person. You don't need to italicise.

I don't think there's a hard-and-fast rule to this, but I think italicising and crediting may be too much.

Your decision also has to take into account how long ago the quote occurred. If it's too many scenes back, then you risk the user not knowing where it came from.

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