: Re: How to format dialogue with an embedded long monologue I use the following formats for dialogues: dialogue dialogue - describing action (if any) dialogue - describing action (if any) - more

@Murray165

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In the first paragraph provide a short summery of all the events. a good way to start it would be "The past have been eventful to say the least..."

In the second paragraph provide clear facts and add in a few points of how the character is feeling but infer them.

Next say how the character is feeling and what action they will take on it.

Finally summarise everything you have said.

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