: Re: Does this opening relate to the message? This is now my third attempt of writing the opening of my book. I took What's advice and tried to send a message to the readers. the message was:
I like it, it gripped me to read more and that's what makes me read and write in the first place. I would have rather started with the protagonist being in the fight to emphasize his current standing in his scenario and then merged into this segment you have here, but that of course is only a suggestion and how I would have done it.
Keep at it, it's looking good :)
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