: Re: Multiple characters without names: how to address First off, the answer might be pretty much obvious (that there is no clear way to distinguish these characters) but I would still very much

You have to identify them somehow. Use adjectives.

The tall man vs. the short man
The older man vs. the younger man
The long-haired man vs. the man with the thistle-down hair
The carpenter vs. the electrician
The French man vs. the German man

It may get repetitive to say "her hands rested on the carpenter's shoulders, just they way they rested on the electrician's when she were tired after talking a walk," but that's pretty much what you're stuck with.

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: If you're concerned about too many accidents, then try to find a way to add some purpose to some of them. 1) It's doubtful that you can find a way for a comet to land in someone's garden

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